
A blanket of new snow, soft and crisp and painted orange by street light. The engine rumbles beneath me as it idles, the heater only just starting to warm.
A young boy stands at the side of the road, hands by his sides and face to face with a snowman. A strange kind of creation, tall and thin, it narrows out towards the neck. No round head or friendly face, more a tower of tightly packed snow that tapers off into nothing.
I sit and watch through the fogged up windows. The road is quiet behind me, the snow untouched but for the tracks of my wheels. No footprints but those of the boy, whose small shadow stretches out behind him like silk. An echo of a question threatens to form before it drifts away again, out over the blanketed ground. This kind of snow swallows any sound at all.
As I sit there, watching the two of them, he begins to melt. It makes no sense at all; the temperature is still a few below zero. But he melts all the same, until the crooked, misshapen snowman is all that remains.
Photo by Flickr user Digital Sextant – used under Creative Commons
A beautiful mood piece. The tone is gorgeous, eerie, and wistful. Love his shadow stretching out like silk. So much that disappears before fully developing. nice.
Thank you, Jilanne – really glad you enjoyed it. It’s based on a bad dream I had a couple of nights ago, so pleased that the transience and eeriness came through in the writing!
Exceptionally creepy! Excellent.
PS If you’re after a good musical writing prompt, I’d recommend this one (the end title from Cloud Atlas) which I’ve been working to recently. Suitably soothing and uplifting. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=17zgrCPEb78&list=PLwAWvxlArng1-PJaH5qF61-Bgzz3KA_K8
Thanks, Jo – glad you liked it! It’s not an exact match for the bad dream it’s based on (that was much weirder!) but there’s enough of it in there for it to be both (I hope!) atmospheric and cathartic.
Cheers for the recommended writing prompt, too – always looking for new music to work to, so will check that one out! x
You do love the surprise ending! You got me!!
You’ve no idea how much this comment has cheered me up! Thank you, Hugh – and really pleased you enjoyed the writing :)